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Snow is falling
Down
Down
Down
it goes
Through the trees
And between our toes
We have so much fun,
And forget all our woes
The snowman it melting
There it goes
Bye
Bye
Bye
to the wonderful snow
- by Stylish_n_Cute |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/02/2008 |
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- Title: Snow
- Artist: Stylish_n_Cute
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Description:
inspired by my wish for snow
i know it isn't great, i've never been the best poetry writer
tell me what you think - Date: 12/02/2008
- Tags: snow
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Lolita-GothAnime4Ever - 02/17/2010
- it was really creative, and very vivid! u should write more poems!! 4 STARS
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- xNightingale - 09/13/2009
- it is an interesting format, creative in my opinion. the boldness of the words that rhyme also makes a good effect and kinda leads the reader in how to read it. good job.
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- Candelaria - 07/21/2009
- You did a wonderful job ^.^
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- kk4christ777 - 06/16/2009
- i enjoid it. way 2 go yo!!!! XD
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- Joshua PMP - 05/31/2009
- I wish i was you
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- SuperFae - 02/11/2009
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*ignoring previous comment*
i believe it's called FREE-VERSE!!!! (something i write a lot of)
anyways, this is really good. very cute! - Report As Spam
- Hikari de Grazia - 12/16/2008
- I can't really consider that as a poem... confused
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