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Chasing October
By:sexyback26
Oh october why are u leaving me
your comfort your warmth
oh october were are thou
please stay for November
November is cold, dreadful, and grim
so many leaves falling by the rim
why must u leave so soon
i guess I'll have to see you
Three months after june
oh october cant you see
my love for you is real
i will miss you but i will not fear
for I'll just have to wait for you next year
or maybe next fall we would see it all
oh the fun we'll have rolling in the leaves
cant u stay for a month more pleese
this is all i can write but its not over
for i will eternally be Chasing you October
- by hotwingsboy |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/06/2008 |
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- Title: Chasing october
- Artist: hotwingsboy
- Description: enforces the love for the seasons
- Date: 12/06/2008
- Tags: chasing october
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Kari Twilight Mist - 07/17/2010
- Nice but the spelling and capitalization made my eyes bleed a bit so 3/5.
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- Mushiwushi - 12/28/2009
- cool, tip=right spellings matter
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- angel of fortune - 06/05/2009
- Dunno it sorta is a holiday 1 its kwl bi the way smile
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- Maddyll - 12/30/2008
- I love it!!! but it's not a holiday poem.
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- make-pretend cigarettes - 12/21/2008
- kewl
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- hotwingsboy - 12/06/2008
- love it oh yea i wrote it tee-hee
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