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She listened rather closely,
and sat there rather still.
On Christmas Eve, at 12 o' clock exactly
just waiting...
waiting...
waiting.
She discreetly moved to the window
and looked up at the
blue-gray sky.
Closing her eyes,
She wished
and wished
and wished...
For a white Christmas.
Silly her! She lives in
a warm town!
A beach town...
An unsnowy town...
What a bother!
Nevertheless!
She turned to the sky
And wished for the beautiful flakes
that she's only ever seen on tv
and wished...
and wished...
and wished...
Sighing sadly,
The girl went to bed.
A tear slipped down her cheek,
And she quickly fell asleep.
Darling, wake up! Said her mother.
She rubbed her sleepy eye.
It's a Christmas miracle!
Look, be amazed!
It's snowing in California!
The girl tumbled to the window
and didn't believe her eyes.
What she was seeing was,
Well, Impossible!
But it fell quietly,
a perfect snow
and frosted windows.
and she closed her eyes
and cried...
and cried...
and cried tears of joy!
It was perfect!
A Christmas wish come true.
- Title: The Christmas Wish Come True
- Artist: animbkwrm
- Description: She only ever wanted one thing for Christmas. You can't package it, you can't control it, and when you live in California, you surely can't get it! Or can you?
- Date: 12/06/2008
- Tags: christmas wish come true
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Comments (4 Comments)
- animbkwrm - 06/02/2009
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its a free verse :p
not all poems have to rhyme.
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- dudecool61 - 04/17/2009
- needed to be more poetic
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- xX_Kozakura_Xx - 02/27/2009
- pretty good but look into using a rhyme scheme. I like the repetition of the words though, very nice touch. 4/5
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- fall-n_war angel - 12/22/2008
- seems more like a story but it was really good^^
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