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gonk scream The bitter cold bites
Tomorrow brings the same
Nothing but the cold
As the snow falls down
I see beyond the dead tree
A bus is coming
- by Fire-Eating-Dromenesss |
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- Title: New England Bus Stop
- Artist: Fire-Eating-Dromenesss
- Description: I was inspired to write this from my experience with the harsh New England Winters.. when walking to the bus stop seems like a battle of life and death against the relentless wind!
- Date: 12/10/2008
- Tags: cold winter tree stop snow
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Tachanne - 04/18/2010
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This is a good haiku. c;
But for the 2nd line, it only has 6 syllables. mad - Report As Spam
- angelsupernova93 - 10/11/2009
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It is really good and simple
Love it - Report As Spam
- Rude - 10/05/2009
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Story of my life xD
5/5 - Report As Spam
- Silent_Whysper - 07/31/2009
- awsome. 5/5
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- u_want_mi - 05/21/2009
- omgg the gayest poem ever and so stupid neverrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr will winnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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- pinoy_hustla16_Bsy - 03/17/2009
- xP
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