- How cruel the snow..... the snow is white and what we may call pure..... yet..... it fails to come.... the snow has left me behind.... it has forgotten the world... that of what it used to triumphantly cover.... how cruel the snow...... how cruel the snow
- by Cruel_But_Caring |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: How cruel the snow
- Artist: Cruel_But_Caring
- Description: Obviously about snow xD well enjoy.
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: cruel snow
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- XxGaaraxisxLovexX - 08/20/2009
- Very good
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- molestedchimp2461 - 07/30/2009
- pickles
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- Zynd the Lucky - 06/29/2009
- ah... forget bloodtearrose. i use "..."'s all the time. that poem is DEEP.
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- bloodtearrose - 12/18/2008
- You use too many "..." If you are trying to make a point in the way the reader is supposed to hear these words, use something else and stop milking it. Also you have lack in capitalization and punctuation. This makes the work very cliché and unappealing. 1-5
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