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Do you see them,
The snowflakes in the air?
Everyone's always happy,
And they never have a care.
Do you hear them,
The silver bells ringing?
All around me,
Everyone's singing.
The call out to me,
Include me in the fun.
It's the only time of the year
They treat me as someone.
I know it's Christmas
And I should be happy too.
But I don't know if I can
If it's a Christmas without you.
I attend the parties,
And join in on all the toasts.
I act like I forgot you
When it's you I miss the most.
They say Christmas is for miracles.
And here I am, wishing, dreaming
For you to notice me.
To talk to me, see me.
I hand out presents
And accept them from friends,
Hiding the agony I dearly
Wish would just end.
I know it's Christmas.
Even I deserve to be happy to.
I just don't know if I can
If it's a Christmas without you.
I walk away because
I've finally had enough.
The joy doesn't fix
The pain I feel from love.
It's still Christmas,
And I always knew
That I'd have to go through
A Christmas without you.
- by GrimmMari-chan |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: Christmas Without You
- Artist: GrimmMari-chan
- Description: A poem just off the top of my head. I'm kinda having trouble with a relationship (or lack of one) and this is just how I feel...
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: christmas without
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Comments (7 Comments)
- skyril - 05/04/2010
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Wow really sad..
great though 5/5 - Report As Spam
- Keshine190 - 11/06/2009
- Wow great job, normally i am really critical on peoples works (probably more than i should =P) but this is a 5/5
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- Ziralove - 07/11/2009
- this is amazing...
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- Calanie - 03/24/2009
- Great job
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- ll Tears of Joy ll - 02/11/2009
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Its a very good poem
Alot of people find it surprising that i write too
As i am young
But you have alot of talent
No matter of your age - Report As Spam
- MageKirby - 02/04/2009
- It was good. If u refined it a little bit more with better diction and syntax, it would be really awesome. Some parts are a little rough to mouth.
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- lady bluej - 02/04/2009
- wow tottally awesome i absolutely love it 5 star i hope u win plz rate mine
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