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What happened to the burning log?
Got replaced by commercial fog.
What happened to the starry nights?
Got replaced by Christmas lights.
What happed to the home cooked meal?
Got replaced by the take out deal.
What happed to the charity's?
Got replaced by the Christmas trees.
What happed to things made by hand?
Got relpaced by the name brand.
I don't really know or really care,
what happened to that Christmas air.
What happened to my good heart?
Well, I've gotten coal from the start.
What happed to my holiday cheer?
It go locked away by greedy fear.
Now what do you think of me?
You probably think I'm a Skruge to be.
But I've just got one thing to say,
I just don't want a commercial holiday.
- by HyuugaJulie |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: What happend?
- Artist: HyuugaJulie
- Description: You see, I'm just really tired of this whole 'I want this for Christmas! If you don't get me it you don't love me!' stuff. I mean, what DID happen? When did people get this greedy? I just wanted to show you, poetry style! Not all poems have to be happy! I'm not emo, okay! Everyone that reads my poems says I'm emo! D:<
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: commercial fake false replaced
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Comments (5 Comments)
- KaTz Evans - 06/03/2011
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LuLz!!! I agree and 5/5 awesome poem!!!!
oh and btw its not emo.... - Report As Spam
- The Bunny of Doom - 11/11/2009
- OMF Thats soooo true. I agree
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- MsNerdLinger - 06/12/2009
- i agree and def not emo
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- qomgitsme - 04/06/2009
- Starts good, ends good, gets a little bit weak in the middle. I don't understand what you mean by "What happened to the charities? Got replaced by Christmas trees." To me those two correspond. But I dunno. 4/5
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- Sakura Haruno cutiecat - 01/20/2009
- Ur great i love it nice job!!! 5/5
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