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Sitting by the fire place show sadness love and hopefullness
one time she walks down a trail her and her brother did only she seeing his spirit
he comes every christmas but not this one
- by hopeannroxxi |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: Friends
- Artist: hopeannroxxi
- Description: someone who lost there brother in war and feels like she dosent have any more friends
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: family love brother
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Comments (4 Comments)
- xXcut3_lov3-5xX - 05/21/2010
- hey!
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- jasha0 - 12/21/2008
- very nice... i will give you a 4/5 for the poem but it would be great if you ha some emotion in it... something to make the reader feel the sarrow...
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- VashLikesPoprockz - 12/12/2008
- Hey I enter the contest too look me up. your poem is nice too
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- hopeannroxxi - 12/12/2008
- hi
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