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He smiled as he strolled across,
Leaving footprints upon the ground:
Stepping down through the fragile frost,
Exposing land of earthen brown.
The blades of grass bowed beneath him,
Bouncing up as he passed through,
Poking up from where his feet
Crunched and crackled the frozen dew.
Once his pathway was fully marked,
He looked back at the grass and moss.
The empty, iced patch, once so stark,
Artistic prints now slowly crossed.
“A pleasant sight,” he thought right then
And turned to wander on his way.
“What pauses, smiling, I’ll begin
To those who pass this path today.”
Nary a minute after, fate
Sent one more person past the sight
Who looked with disdain at the prints
Pressed slowly into pristine white.
“Well, what a lovely frost, indeed,
This was,” he pondered. “So, then, who
Would think to cut across the weeds
And ruin them by walking through?”
- by Lady Lagomorph |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: The Frosted Grass
- Artist: Lady Lagomorph
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This was inspired by a chocolate wrapper with a message telling me to, "Walk across frost covered grass, leaving footprints." The poem captures the purity of new frost, the differences between what people consider "artistic," and how someone can spend time on something they are proud of, only to have another individual disapprove of it. An older version is in the Arenas. - Date: 12/12/2008
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Comments (3 Comments)
- persinomm - 06/26/2009
- it rhymes!! i automatically like nice poetry that rhymes, unless if its very inappropiate. So great job! I like the view of this! ^^
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- 88qute-g-a-i-a88bye - 02/02/2009
- Pretty good. It is interesting about the thing of the chocolate wrapper. 5/5
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- terminallyCapricornus - 12/20/2008
- GREAT 5/5!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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