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Love is like a rose blooming in the springtime
Slowly opening and eager to see it's soul mate, the sun
So brightly shining upon the rose
The sun nurtures it in it's time of need
Hoping the rose give a seed
So more love may spread
So beautiful in red
The elegance of the rose
- by Linear Corsage |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/13/2008 |
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- Title: The Elegance of the Rose
- Artist: Linear Corsage
- Description: I won a poetry contest with this love poem. Remember that not all poetry completely rhymes.
- Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: elegance
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Mayor unknownprincess - 09/28/2010
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very noticable and i also noticed that you really use emotion when you write
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- Crystal Whitney White - 08/07/2009
- not really into poems but that was good
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- hinata642 - 06/14/2009
- cool
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- paramore_angel31 - 04/05/2009
- it was BEUTIFUL its wat every man should think of when he meets a women!!!
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- ILoveSupermac18 - 01/28/2009
- it was beautiful! good job. 5/5
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- Amunankhage - 01/17/2009
- I wrote something similar to this once.... It is a truly meaningful piece of work... But work a little on lyrics. Still, I give 4/5
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- Pikajane - 12/21/2008
- interesting poem, just one little note though, there is no apostrophe on the "it's", it's just "its". Other than that great poem, I appreciate the rhetorical devices and the fact that you cast away from the conventional rhyming
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