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In the night while the moon shines bright
one little candle flame dances about.
Outside the snow lay silent
and in my mind there isn't a doubt
as i hold that one little candle flame in the palm of my hand
I'm dreaming of a winter wonder land,
where snow flakes dance and deer will prance
as i walk through my winter wonder land;
one little candle flame in the palm of my hand.
- by bsa17venturer |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/13/2008 |
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- Title: One Little Candle
- Artist: bsa17venturer
- Description: This poem describes someone staring into the dancing flame of a candle and dreaming of their perfect winter.
- Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: little candle
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Comments (5 Comments)
- wolf7447 - 05/22/2009
- cool i liked it >_< biggrin
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- audacieux08 - 05/06/2009
- It was nice and cewt.=)
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- iori182 - 04/23/2009
- Cool . I think i'll giv u a rate of 4. smile
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- vampiredemon34 - 03/24/2009
- good poem i liked it
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- ll W E i R D - G A S M ll - 12/20/2008
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pretty good [:
keep working on poems and you'll be an expert [:
500.5 [:
i rated yours can you plz do mine?
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