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Where are you going,
Can't you stay?
Couldn't you wait for that day?
When we go some certain way.
Couldn't you wait for that lovely day?
The sky is blue,
The clouds are white.
Why couldn't you go during the night?
It's hard to see with my sight.
Why couldn't you go during the night?
There's something in my mind,
And it's coming coming to me.
Do you you want to find; to see?
Give your peace; your loyalty.
There you'll change and to be.
- by lgarstemerson |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/13/2008 |
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- Title: The _____ (BLANK)
- Artist: lgarstemerson
- Description: This poem is about someone in love who can't make up there mind between there partner and doing something else. If you can't make up your mind then the decision is nothing which in turn equals BLANK.
- Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: choices blank lover mindless decisions
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- Terrimisu - 11/29/2009
- very emotional
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- Ninja oturan - 01/24/2009
- Ayumi_Cherry - you are harry
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- Ninja oturan - 01/24/2009
- du er ikke så pen.......
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- Ayumi_Cherry - 12/16/2008
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Yes it is pretty emotional but good =]
please rate mine too, its called life, lost, 2hearts1destiny.
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- lgarstemerson - 12/13/2008
- Man now that's a very emotional poem!
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