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Nights we will remember,
when summer was around
but now the leaves are turning brown
and falling to the ground.
There was a sweetness in the air,
not like that of a fruit
but only of a lovers breath
and that's the honest truth.
And when our hands are tangled
and lips formed with a kiss,
that is the day that i will love
and miss when it's dismissed.
But now that summers over,
and the suns warmth has gone astray
fall shall dip it's head in and wisk our love away.
- by Music-Dude-Melodies |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/13/2008 |
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- Title: For my honey
- Artist: Music-Dude-Melodies
- Description: A poem that I wrote for my boyfriend. We met in the summer of '08. Since I'm in College and he's in School a state away we're unable to see each other as often as we'd like. This is just my feelings about our situation.
- Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: honey calreton adria love hands
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Comments (7 Comments)
- machine gun meister - 09/21/2010
- I'd give it a 8 for good literary usage and the fact that i love poetry
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- LRHS - 08/10/2009
- IDK its different but good. i give it a 3
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- Legendary Pirate Plasma - 07/14/2009
- Sorry that I have to pull a Simon Cowell on you right now, but it's time to get a little harsher. It's definitely good enough to get a solid 4 in my book. The reason you don't get a 5 is due to lack of attention to spelling and grammar in some places. But yeah. It's great, but not without flaws.
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- jakreel - 06/02/2009
- good poem 5/5
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- ThisIsMyDeathbed_x - 03/06/2009
- awwwwwwwww!!!!! 5
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- a-little-lost-in-love - 12/22/2008
- wow u can really write. nice job 5/5!!!!!=D
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- Black Ski - 12/15/2008
- Wow surprised
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