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Close my eyes and breathe in.
Now exhale
and let the heat of breath
dance on the chill of night.
Some thoughts
will freeze in place
and others...
others will twinkle like tiny ice crystals
glittering in winter's dark.
Standing perfectly still,
but for the occasional shiver.
Knowing through it all,
that the inner-dance
is a thing of mysterious beauty.
- by Breathe Akasha |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/13/2008 |
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- Title: Thoughts in Winter's Crystal
- Artist: Breathe Akasha
- Description: Tis the season for shiny things. Tis the season for dark evenings, lit up by impending electricity bills and tinny-sounding familiar songs floating weakly through evening's chill. None of it means much to me, really. It's just interesting to watch. Hovering on the apartment balcony in brief intervals, the feel of frost and meandering thoughts come in, sometimes riding on the low, mournful song of a passing train.
- Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: thoughts winters crystal
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Suki Iwa - 12/25/2008
- nice you did pretty good5/5
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- Briar Rosethorn - 12/20/2008
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Very eloquent and it flows nicely, even though it's a free verse poem.
I like it a lot. - Report As Spam
- too2sweet - 12/18/2008
- It's beautiful!!! 5/5
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- Ayumi_Cherry - 12/16/2008
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really good =]]
please rate mine too, its called life, lost, 2hearts1destiny.
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