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Love is like a lump of gold,
Hard to get,
Hard to hold,
Out of all the Boys/Girls I've met,
Your the one I can't forget,
I do believe that god above,
Created you for me to love,
He picked you out of all the rest,
Because he knew I'd love you best!!
Created by......LillyDillys
- by LillyDillys |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/14/2008 |
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- Title: Love
- Artist: LillyDillys
- Description: For lovers out there!!
- Date: 12/14/2008
- Tags: love partners foreveryours loved yourmine
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Legendary Pirate Plasma - 07/14/2009
- It's not bad at all. A tiny bit on the simplistic side and you also botched one of the lines, breaking the rhyming sequence of the rest of the poem. I wouldn't have mentioned it if your poem wasn't supposed to rhyme, but since it is, I'll give you a 3. Not great, but not bad either.
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- sexyshuga - 03/28/2009
- This is toooooooooooo cute
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- HeartSeal - 12/30/2008
- that is so cool i LOVED it!
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- animbkwrm - 12/18/2008
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that's so sweet!
5/5 - Report As Spam
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