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The sky is covered with fluffy clouds
Everything seems to be covered with whipped cream
The Christmas lights sparkle like stars reflected in the river
Everything is frigid except his warm hand around mine
My cheeks are numb, though I know theyre hot
He looks at me, smiles, and hugs me close
I smile because he's so warm, or maybe thats just me
We stand there for what seems like hours, his arms around me
I get tired but don't want to go so I lay my head on his shoulder
For theres one thing I'll never grow tired of
And that's this Christmas Romance.
- by Akari ninja warrior |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/14/2008 |
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- Title: Christmas Romance
- Artist: Akari ninja warrior
- Description: This is a very romantic poem that i just wrote, its something ive kinda always wanted to happent to me but i know it wont because: 1. it doesnt snow here and 2. there are no bridges here.
- Date: 12/14/2008
- Tags: christmas romance love
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Comments (1 Comments)
- SashaFurdacion - 03/01/2009
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Hm.
When I read it, I didn't feel anything or see anything.
There wasn't any description of the background or where you two were at. There wasn't any description on how you felt what your emotions were. Also, the poem didn't really flow very well. - Report As Spam