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I watch the fireworks and remember everything that has happened this year.
New friends, a new school, first kiss and everything that was good. Then i think of the bad. Break ups, injuries, and punishments. Its a new year. And im gonna make this one better than last
- by Shanetthewizarddude |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/14/2008 |
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- Title: FlashBaxk
- Artist: Shanetthewizarddude
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- Date: 12/14/2008
- Tags: previous newyear
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- jacolyn_owns - 07/24/2009
- It doesn't have to look like a poem to be a poem, guys. Thats the beauty of poetry, it can be whatever you want. But, I didn't really like thia because it has a lot of fragmented sentences and things that just don't make sense together.
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- careypricerox31 - 07/05/2009
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it is not so much a poem more a coment or a thing to say
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- Follower_Of_Jashin - 03/24/2009
- it sounds like more of a resolution than a poem
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