- by Doctr Muffin |
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- | Submitted on 09/09/2008 |
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- Title: 9 11 the poem
- Artist: Doctr Muffin
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Description:
My whole world is falling down
Nine one one, nine one one.
In smoke and debris our loved ones drown
Nine one one, we say.
Husbands, brothers, sons, and dads
Nine one one, nine one one,
Wives and sisters, daughters, moms,
All come to help that day.
Senseless deaths from hate and war,
Nine one one, nine one one,
In our homeland or yonder shore,
When will it go away?
Our children need us to be there,
Nine one, one, nine one, one,
To give them tender love and care
that drives their fears away. - Date: 09/09/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- The Lady Andromeda - 09/11/2008
- If this is about the poem, you should've entered the poem in the Writing Section. And err..what with the tail? This doesn't make a lot of sense...
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- _Livz_Off_Dalie_Prizez_ - 09/11/2008
- I WET ME SELF FOR REAL!! mom didn't get mad, just past out.
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- Yume Kitsune_rei - 09/11/2008
- If you mostly wanted to submit a poem, maybe you should have done the writing arena instead. The avatar seems a bit random other than the burning buildings.
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- [ Felidae ] - 09/11/2008
- Oh dear.
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- LegalRodrigo - 09/11/2008
- Cool
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- zombieking95 - 09/11/2008
- dude all you talked about was the towers wat about the that was aimed at the white house the people lost there life on that flight now stop writing poems and take action like i say some times drop the pun grab a gun and dont stand in the middle of the city (people might think u did it
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- Finaldrist - 09/11/2008
- great poem, really got the sense of the whole issue
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