- by Doctr Muffin |
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- | Submitted on 09/09/2008 |
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- Title: 9 11 the poem
- Artist: Doctr Muffin
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Description:
My whole world is falling down
Nine one one, nine one one.
In smoke and debris our loved ones drown
Nine one one, we say.
Husbands, brothers, sons, and dads
Nine one one, nine one one,
Wives and sisters, daughters, moms,
All come to help that day.
Senseless deaths from hate and war,
Nine one one, nine one one,
In our homeland or yonder shore,
When will it go away?
Our children need us to be there,
Nine one, one, nine one, one,
To give them tender love and care
that drives their fears away. - Date: 09/09/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Kenmei Haburi2 - 09/10/2008
- the buildings look stupid
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- Laydi Nite - 09/10/2008
- The poem should be in the writing section of the arena, since the avi doesn't match the poem at all. Nice effort on the poem, no effort on making the avi represent the poem. The only part that (with a huge stretch of the imagination) would have anything to do with 9/11 is the burning city item.
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- Bring Us The Horizon - 09/10/2008
- twili... you cant vote 9 =/
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- PinkXxKiss - 09/10/2008
- Nice.
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- Twili Midona - 09/10/2008
- wow 9
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- SCHWARZENGERMAN - 09/10/2008
- when war is necessary war brings pain but when war is necessary war brings peace.nice avi awkward poem
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- Lucidique Eternal - 09/10/2008
- Keep the poetry to the writing arena. I don't understand what this entry has to do with 9/11. City makes sense, but the avatar itself doesn't. Avatar is too big. New arena = auto fail.
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