- by Doctr Muffin |
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- | Submitted on 09/09/2008 |
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- Title: 9 11 the poem
- Artist: Doctr Muffin
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Description:
My whole world is falling down
Nine one one, nine one one.
In smoke and debris our loved ones drown
Nine one one, we say.
Husbands, brothers, sons, and dads
Nine one one, nine one one,
Wives and sisters, daughters, moms,
All come to help that day.
Senseless deaths from hate and war,
Nine one one, nine one one,
In our homeland or yonder shore,
When will it go away?
Our children need us to be there,
Nine one, one, nine one, one,
To give them tender love and care
that drives their fears away. - Date: 09/09/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Steve Kittsune - 09/10/2008
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Crash and burn...
after the turn...
right into a building hive.
Nevermore...
Will it be seen in yore...
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- A [Grim] Silhouette - 09/10/2008
- I prefer free verse, but your poem retains a decent sense of maturity and emotion. This is an avatar arena, though, so you're getting 1'd.
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- GangAhJi - 09/10/2008
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i like the poem =D
and ur avi!
5/5 - Report As Spam
- FlyingPuffball - 09/10/2008
- Nice
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- Josef990 - 09/10/2008
- nice avatar..
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- Innocent Knight - 09/10/2008
- nice avatar and poem as well....
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- xBea Maria - 09/10/2008
- wow! you're quite good at making poems!
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