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- Title: 9 11 the poem
- Artist: Doctr Muffin
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Description:
My whole world is falling down
Nine one one, nine one one.
In smoke and debris our loved ones drown
Nine one one, we say.
Husbands, brothers, sons, and dads
Nine one one, nine one one,
Wives and sisters, daughters, moms,
All come to help that day.
Senseless deaths from hate and war,
Nine one one, nine one one,
In our homeland or yonder shore,
When will it go away?
Our children need us to be there,
Nine one, one, nine one, one,
To give them tender love and care
that drives their fears away. - Date: 09/09/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- kuranono - 09/09/2008
- nice
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- _miss_aiya_ - 09/09/2008
- poem is good. avi is just average
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- Doctr Muffin - 09/09/2008
- the coon tail means that i felt like a fool biggrin
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- MC Fuu - 09/09/2008
- You should enter the poem in the writing arena. The avi is kinda visually unappealing.
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- LabTechZ003 - 09/09/2008
- The idea is good, but the avatar doesn't quite match. Why is there a racoon tail on it?
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- 1_SuGaR lUv_1 - 09/09/2008
- eehh.. okie
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- ninjahedgehog6 - 09/09/2008
- very good poem. but in all fairness I'm here to rate avis and i give yours a 3
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