- by Doctr Muffin |
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- | Submitted on 09/09/2008 |
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- Title: 9 11 the poem
- Artist: Doctr Muffin
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My whole world is falling down
Nine one one, nine one one.
In smoke and debris our loved ones drown
Nine one one, we say.
Husbands, brothers, sons, and dads
Nine one one, nine one one,
Wives and sisters, daughters, moms,
All come to help that day.
Senseless deaths from hate and war,
Nine one one, nine one one,
In our homeland or yonder shore,
When will it go away?
Our children need us to be there,
Nine one, one, nine one, one,
To give them tender love and care
that drives their fears away. - Date: 09/09/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- 5aviors-5orrow - 09/14/2008
- NICE PEOM AND NICE AVI
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- The_darkness_assassin - 09/14/2008
- cool
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- A True Lie - 09/14/2008
- Nice poem, but a huge avvy standing in the middle throws me off lol.
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- Mrs Lee Admlnistrator - 09/14/2008
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yea could b betta but its cool
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- sumillian - 09/14/2008
- 10
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- CplCannonFodder - 09/14/2008
- could be better
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- Aereka - 09/14/2008
- Nice, but the coon tail is pretty out of place here.
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