- by Doctr Muffin |
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- | Submitted on 09/09/2008 |
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- Title: 9 11 the poem
- Artist: Doctr Muffin
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Description:
My whole world is falling down
Nine one one, nine one one.
In smoke and debris our loved ones drown
Nine one one, we say.
Husbands, brothers, sons, and dads
Nine one one, nine one one,
Wives and sisters, daughters, moms,
All come to help that day.
Senseless deaths from hate and war,
Nine one one, nine one one,
In our homeland or yonder shore,
When will it go away?
Our children need us to be there,
Nine one, one, nine one, one,
To give them tender love and care
that drives their fears away. - Date: 09/09/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Monicorain - 09/12/2008
- awesome job dude 5 stars
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- Zwii - 09/12/2008
- ... ... ... 9/11... I feel ya
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- Stylish_n_Cute - 09/12/2008
- aww, i love it! even though i was only 7 i remember that day as if it was yesterday.
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- Stina006 - 09/12/2008
- EmiriHeart are u retarded? 'What's 9 11?' omg...what are you 5? it's like the most awful thing to EVER happen to America! ask your parents>> btw, I love you avatar Doctor Muffin! the poems amazing too! 5/5
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- EmiriHeart - 09/12/2008
- What's 9 11?
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- For the Pure - 09/12/2008
- your poem is beautiful! :_)
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- MademoiselleHarmonie - 09/12/2008
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join the poem one too arena too
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