- by Doctr Muffin |
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- | Submitted on 09/09/2008 |
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- Title: 9 11 the poem
- Artist: Doctr Muffin
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Description:
My whole world is falling down
Nine one one, nine one one.
In smoke and debris our loved ones drown
Nine one one, we say.
Husbands, brothers, sons, and dads
Nine one one, nine one one,
Wives and sisters, daughters, moms,
All come to help that day.
Senseless deaths from hate and war,
Nine one one, nine one one,
In our homeland or yonder shore,
When will it go away?
Our children need us to be there,
Nine one, one, nine one, one,
To give them tender love and care
that drives their fears away. - Date: 09/09/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Desert-Brat - 09/14/2008
- Love it! You should submit your poem!
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- wassamattawitya - 09/14/2008
- Very good poem. I think that you should submit the poem into the Writing's Arenas. ^_^ 5/5
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- Seph Baelzara - 09/14/2008
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Where were you when the world stopped turning that September day
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A lovely poem indeed though - Report As Spam
- fefe12345 - 09/14/2008
- love it! vote bac plz
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- Hollow Obscurity - 09/14/2008
- Nice. biggrin I like it.
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- Collectible - 09/14/2008
- Great poem, 5 stars
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- IceMilk - 09/14/2008
- not bad not bad
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