- Title: ShamelessBrokenHeart
- Artist: Suitachi
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Description:
((I am sorry if I'm Bohemian))
Twice she broke his heart.
Each time she loved him more.
But when she finally came back,
He no longer had any love for her.
She's hoping he'll come back,
But her hopes are shameless lies.
...^_^''...I thought it looked pretty good, and I know my poem doesn't rhyme, but that's called a FREE VERSE. They're not 'uppose to rhyme. ^_^''
And yes, it has everything to do with the avi. (I'm stupid, I put sonnet last time). - Date: 10/29/2006
- Tags: shameless broken heart poem
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Comments (7 Comments)
- purple_sky_angle - 10/29/2006
- gjh,gdxkhgckh
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- b1acke1mo - 10/29/2006
- awesome
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- Abisian - 10/29/2006
- cute, i suppose ... 8/10
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- lance_2006 - 10/29/2006
- cool
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- Tai Lee Chao - 10/29/2006
- nice
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- drockk - 10/29/2006
- nice ill give a 7
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- Majikina - 10/29/2006
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You just threw some random stuff you had
together.
3/10. - Report As Spam
