- by Emergency Sugar Rush |
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- | Submitted on 11/20/2008 |
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- Title: Balloon
- Artist: Emergency Sugar Rush
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Description:
You had something in your hand when you visited me that time.
A little white thing, floating in the air, and hitting you in the head when the wind would kick up.
A balloon. I'm a little old for balloons now, but still, I reach for it, and tie it to my wrist watching as it bounces up and down.
You smile. And so do I.
You probably won't understand unless you read the full story.
http://www.gaiaonline.com/journal/journal.php?mode=view&post_id=24142387&u=13917210 - Date: 11/20/2008
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Ixelf - 11/30/2008
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aww.. like the description. c:
hmm. very original.
i'm a bit disturbed to the thingy on her head..
5/5 though. ^^ - Report As Spam
- Guilty smiles - 11/28/2008
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this is very creative
one of the best ive seen
the description is very awesome
i love balloons too.LOL
you should make poems in the writing arena - Report As Spam
- SAmaryllis - 11/26/2008
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Okay, since it looks like you actually put effort in your avvie unlike a lot people here, I'm going to give a serious crit. : D
I like how you matched the purple white of the balloon with the bra, but then blue whites of the watch and vest and the white in the tights and head wrap are too white to actually match with either the purple or blue. (: You also could've used something white on the bottom, near the shoes. 2/5~ - Report As Spam
- Finer Love - 11/26/2008
- hey i know yuuu
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- DJ Double B - 11/26/2008
- dudet, just be yourself, unique, and different. 5/5 dudet, 5/5.
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- Emergency Sugar Rush - 11/26/2008
- I would love suggestions for what to do. :3
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