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- | Submitted on 10/17/2009 |
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- Title: Anthr Red-Shirt Bites the dust
- Artist: Commander Tobias
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Description:
Crewman Jenkins was repairing a damaged EPS relay in engineering when he felt something move inside his chest. It was followed by a heartburn feeling and pressure. He began sweating profusely and had difficulty breathing. Then before he could call out for help, CRACK!!! his ribs exploded through his uniform, followed by the birthing cries of the alien creature.
There was a phaser blast, and the creature was destroyed.
The last thing we hear is Bones saying "He's dead Jim!"
- Date: 10/17/2009
- Tags: startrek alien death space halloween
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Comments (7 Comments)
- ii_Bubbles_XDD - 10/25/2009
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Love the story line 5/5
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- 6aiagirl - 10/24/2009
- 5/5 rate back i love this... hahah "He's dead Jim."
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- Skweetlez - 10/22/2009
- Lol, love it
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- Princess Z-M - 10/20/2009
- Yeah I hate that limit as well. Because it causes some people to use txt tlk. Which is lame and they get hit badly by it. Still good entry and thanks for the kind PM.
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- Commander Tobias - 10/20/2009
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Thank you all very much. I made a way better story, but it said I had to cut it down to 500 characters. Sad day, it was way awesome.
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- Princess Z-M - 10/20/2009
- Well done! If you keep this kind of stuff you might win! Too bad people like you can't be featured. This probably would have won if it had. 5/5
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- Msoriginaljester - 10/20/2009
- woot!
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