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- | Submitted on 11/08/2009 |
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- Title: Slave, fighting for her master
- Artist: lieutenantxxSara
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Description:
"give me back my master...or...or else your baby dragon is going to die!"
i lost my master in battle...and i also got left behind...master gave me my clothes..he said they looked beautful on me...the servent gave me a sword before he died...ive used it ever sence
the evil people took my master far far away, im searching for him ever sense that day... - Date: 11/08/2009
- Tags: slave fighting master
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Comments (6 Comments)
- JadieGlitch - 11/15/2009
- I like the whole cat thing, but overall it's pretty cluttered. 2/6
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- Matias_Tarius - 11/14/2009
- good idea 4/5
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- sweetcupcake1989 - 11/13/2009
- ugliest one here gross
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- Grandma_Dani - 11/13/2009
- you know what at least she ******** tried...Sara hun u did great ^^...maybe i can help u next time though
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- mortimae - 11/12/2009
- I like the story, but I don't think the idea is very well executed. Those clothes don't strike me as particularly beautiful for one (in contradiction to your story), rather the scarf especially looks ugly - and the futuristic sword seems to clash with the medieval dragon. The reasons for her crown/blue skin/cat-like appearance/shoelessness are pretty vague too. And your grammar does need a bit of work. That's all. sweatdrop
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