- by SummersEternalSpirit |
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- | Submitted on 12/18/2009 |
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- Title: The Escape
- Artist: SummersEternalSpirit
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Description:
How long must I remain here?
How will I manage the wait?
How may I bear staying in this solitude?
What I need is an escape.
But how will I do it?
Somthing caught my attention,
A tiny gold key had stopped me in hesitation.
I turn it in its lock slowly, mesmerized by its appearence,
for freedom was now mine.
And I didn't take it as conscience
(Sorry i couldn't ryme better, Hope you enjoy it anyway!) - Date: 12/18/2009
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Hypnotic Wonder - 12/21/2009
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cute, but i think ya shoulda made the title something like 'out in the old west' or something, and taken away the green and replaced it with like brown. but anyways i <3 it, 5/5 and faved.
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- 666Hera - 12/20/2009
- hehe cuuuute i like the poem makes sense 5/5
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