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- Title: Night is Darkening Around Me
- Artist: uchiha fxcks
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Description:
A belated Valentine's submission.
Here's some appropriate poetry as others write better than me.
"Clouds beyond clouds above me,
Wastes beyond wastes below ;
But nothing drear can move me :
I will not, cannot go."
-- Emily Bronte
"I love you as certain dark things are to be loved,
in secret, between the shadow and the soul...
I love you straightforwardly, without complexities or pride;
so I love you because I know no other way".
-- Pablo Neruda
Critiques are appreciated. - Date: 02/10/2014
- Tags: love valentine littledeadwhitegirl dark
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Comments (6 Comments)
- uchiha fxcks - 02/22/2014
- thanks to everyone for the votes! it's been a long since since i entered so it's nice to do this well considering the competition. c:
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- uchiha fxcks - 02/19/2014
- heh yeah i guess this is pretty cheesy. i wonder if it would have been better without the male companion, since he's not the centerpiece of the work.
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- Heric Fallynar - 02/19/2014
- It looks like a scene from some cheesy soap opera. Now, the girl looks good; she makes the scene work. But Valentine's Day never was my favorite theme; all that ever came out of it was an excuse to harass your crush with mysterious love letters, and saccharine works like this one.
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- uchiha fxcks - 02/17/2014
- yeah that's the one thing i don't like. i couldn't think of how to really incorporate other colors in. oh well.
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- Captain_Redpunch - 02/17/2014
- Nice. I just wish there was something that would really make the muted colors pop out.. you know for contrast?
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- purple panthyr - 02/17/2014
- Imaginative use of that tough guy, I love it! 5/5!
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