- by Brooklyn Hyuuga |
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- | Submitted on 06/01/2020 |
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- Title: Hermosa sonida
- Artist: Brooklyn Hyuuga
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Description:
Gently she glided over to the piano, perfectly manicured nails dancing across polished keys. You inquired curiously if she knew how to play and her answer was like a pixie like smile. Softly, a tune began rising from the baby grand and before you knew it a crowd had manifested around you. Ending on a high note, she caught your eyes as the crowd began to clap.
"Does that answer your question?"
(I had to use google translate for the title lol) - Date: 06/01/2020
- Tags: piano music elegance
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Comments (1 Comments)
- MalevoIence - 06/10/2020
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The smile is already "like the smile of a pixie."
It cannot be "like the smile of a pixie like the smile of a pixie."
Thus, "You inquired [...] and her answer was a pixie-like smile.
Also, inquired already implies curiosity. The adverb is wordy. 5/5 avi tho - Report As Spam
