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As i stood there with my eyes wide as they could go.I waited for the pain,I waited for him to punce and kill me just like that.
But he didnt.He just stood there looking at me,I couldnt tell if that was anger in his eyes or fear.
Billions of questions formed in my mind,but the more important ones were,why is he afraid of me?shouldnt i be afraid of him?And if so why am i not runing away screaming?.
I didnt know how to answer such things,but what i did know that i needed to speak,i needed answers and fast.
But before i could even speak he had opend his mouth,"I'm sorry you found me like this...you must be afraid.But dont worrie i wont hurt you."Nicks voice touched my ears like slik,but i could hear the fear in his voice as he spoke.
I looked at him as if he was crazy,the excitment in my eye's must have scared him beacuse he stped back.
"I Should be asking the same thing"I said softly to him.
He looked down at the fresh kill at his feet,it was a huge grizly bear dead and bleeding.
"I'm just afraid that your scared.I mean you have no idea how a dead bear is at my feet..."Nick said so low i could barely hear him.
"Oh.I know,I've known for awhile I've been fallowing the way you react around me in school to know....your a vampire a'rnt you?A vegiterian"She paused and looked at the bear,"Per say..."I said watching his eyes go from fear to pure agony.
"But how?human storys arnt enought to rely on"He said as he took another step back from.
"It was almost easy, your emotions gave it away...i mean the way you tryed to stay away from me in class or how you always wrinkled your nose when i was to close"I said Giveing a small smile,"it was to easy.."
"Thats not nearly emough to give me away....you truly are amazing...Ev"Nick sighed as he said my name,it sent shivers down my spine.
- by Taste Miii Rainbow |
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- | Submitted on 08/04/2008 |
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- Title: Preface-Half Moon Cries
- Artist: Taste Miii Rainbow
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Description:
This is the preface to a book I'm writing called Half Moon Cries
Its based on a book i read Called twilight...
Please tell me what you think xD..
I'll post my actually stories later,this is just a test run
The image you see at the bottom is Nick... - Date: 08/04/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Taste Miii Rainbow - 12/22/2009
- Hehe like i said this was just a test run.Anyways i have my own stories up now and their much better so take a look!
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- Emilie_Aututmn - 04/12/2009
- Okay, get this: There are actually better vampire books than Twilight!!! And no, I thought this was really bad. There were too many grammatical errors to count and sounds WAAAY too much like Twilight. Try reading some Shakespeare, Bram Stoker, or even Ann Rice for God's sake. Then try writing a story.
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- Julia Dream - 01/18/2009
- Twilight is not the book you need to base your stories and writing style on. Try choosing something with some actual literary merit and decent storytelling to idolize.
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- shogiplayafan14 - 01/01/2009
- it sounds like Twilight...are you a fan?
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- shadyeclipse - 12/22/2008
- nice
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- hollylilcutie - 12/12/2008
- its really good keep up the great work smile
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- Ms Jenna_ Lee - 12/12/2008
- nice story so far^^ although it has some errors in it but overall it was good^^ 4/5
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