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I woke up today thinking it was going to be great, after all I have been with my boyfriend for over 6 months heart , but boy I was wrong today was going to start the end of everything. Here's how it went...
It Started on Friday after school walking home...
"Amy I hear that you and Ray are going out again today wink ," (that's my use be best friend Samantha.)
"Where did you hear a thing like that? redface " (that's me Amy.)
"Oh come on I know you are,"
"Yeah, he said he had to tell me something really important,"
"Oh,"
"What?"
"Nothing,"
"Any way we're going to the park,"
"Sounds... razz romantic,"
"You think?"
"Sure,"
" redface Oh Well I got to go get ready see ya!"
After that I ran home changed out if my school uniform and ran as fast as I could to the park, but now I think I should have walked I should have made him wait made him sweat for what happens now.
"Hey," (This is the Scum Bag Ray. evil )
"Hi,"
"Amy, I have to tell you something really important,"
"Ya, you told me. what is it,"
" I've... Fallen out of love with you,"
sweatdrop "What?"
" I don't love you anymore,"
Tears where forming in my eyes now...
cry "But..."
"I have no feeling for you I... want to break up with you,"
I couldn't bare it after that I just ran, but I didn't go home I ran until I couldn't run anymore. He hurt me that much, after all we've been through he just all of a sudden choose to fall out of love with me.
After a while It started to rain, so I went home.
The next day I couldn't bare to see him so I pretended to be sick, but it didn't work so was an the way to school as slow as a could go and in the corner of my eye I saw Samantha and Ray kissing! The next thing I knew I went over there pulling aside and started to yell at her asking her why and do you know what she said "Because I can't stand to see you happy seeing you happy makes me sick" The next thing I did was Slap her as hard as I could and I don't regret It one bit. I never spoke to ether of them again.
stare I still can't get this out of my mind and I can't Take it any more That's why I'm on the bridge and all I have left to say Is Farewell...
- by Glorytommy |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 10/11/2008 |
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- Title: A Farewell
- Artist: Glorytommy
- Description: Its a Love Story of a unforgettable brake up.(comments encouraged please tell if you liked it or what can be fixed)
- Date: 10/11/2008
- Tags: farewell
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Comments (7 Comments)
- -molotov milkshake- - 10/04/2009
- yawm
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- XxInnocent-FearxX - 03/27/2009
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I seriously would do that (if it was real for me)
And 5 stars for the story! - Report As Spam
- pixarchick - 03/17/2009
- A bit short and not very descriptive...
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- Glorytommy - 10/29/2008
- I see. I'll keep that in mind.
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- Hydeous XL - 10/17/2008
- im not really into love storys. but it was decet. the emotes got annoying after awhile though.... =/
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- Glorytommy - 10/14/2008
- Thanks razz
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- babbygirl475 - 10/13/2008
- that was really great!
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