life and death.

• Artist: xXiiMuleXx
• Description: My aspect of what life and death is.Even though it's not really a poem or lyrics,it's not fiction or non-fiction either.
• Date: 11/09/2008
• Tags: life death

all people are born and all people will die.It is a fact of life.No matter how hard your life may be,never give up.Don't let others hurt you and stand up for yourself.Everyone has the right to a life,no matter where your from,or what you do.People hate their lives,but they don't realise how valuable life is.People hate their parents,but if you didn't have your parents,you wouldn't be here.As people grow older,we can become ill.Every birthday is a joy when your old because you know that that's one extra day that you've gotten past.But all people will die.It's a sad time one someone close to you dies,you'll never hear their voice again,their laughs or their sobs.They'll never be there to comfort you or never there for you to comfort them.But life goes on,and live everyday as if it's your last,because,you never know,it could be.

Comments

[Schoolboyjoey101]

if i could vote on this id give you 5 stars
love it

[GNRrox]

its non-fiction

[Dragon_Fears]

your words are true and it would be a better poem.
People do go through hell, but everymoment is valueable.
Misery loves company at least your not alone. smile

[Twilight_Juliet101]

very good. but i aggree with Maku_susuki it could become a poem if you model it right. either way, great job! 5 stars!!! smile

[cashmonies98]

I like how you put down everyones feelings about things in peoples everyday life. And how you say that no matter how hard life is, you have to live through it and apreciate that you have a roof over your head and food to eat.

[XxirainstormxX]

i thing that was verry touching somehow 5 stars