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My heart pounding in my chest as i run to my class. I burst through the door. "Mrs.Spehar I'm here!!!" I said and ran over to my seat. "Please katie be quiet," Mrs.Spehar said with a little anger in her. After school ended I walked home with my bffl Darkness. i call him that because he said he didnt have a name. "So,how was class today?" Darkness said. "Pretty crappy like everyday."
I said. "Eh...i g2g bye," darkness said and ran. It started to get dark and i heard noises....but what could it be? something was behind me...i can feel it.
I slowly turned around and saw a big black dark boney figure. Its eyes glowing red and it was reaching for me!!! i slowly backed up and ran. I turned back around to see if it was following me. It was gone!! thank god!!! so i headed home again but POOF right in front of me there it was again!! Panic was rising up in me i knew i was gonna die...i grabbed a wooden bat from one of the boys that live next door to me. I swung at the figure and knocked its haed off and broke its bones. the street lights came on and i noticed i just killed the grim reaper!! wow who ever knew that? So i finally headed home and got into bed and fell asleep....but i wasnt alone......
- by XxXEmo_Insane_MuffinXxX |
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- | Submitted on 10/13/2008 |
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- Title: Near Death
- Artist: XxXEmo_Insane_MuffinXxX
- Description: A little girl that sees the grim reaper and tries to excape him
- Date: 10/13/2008
- Tags: near death
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- kirbyismaGENTa - 10/13/2008
- No offense, but it's terrible grammar and spelling. Perhaps try to build up more, rather than in two paragraphs? Other than that it's okay.
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