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There were two guys living together in an apartment.
Their names were Rai and Mutsui.
They've been friends for, like, forever and decided to have just one room until they can go their separate ways.
They never knew that something like this would develop between the two of them...
Rai is a struggling highschool student desperate for a girl ever since his last breakup.
He's been trying to get over that and it still haunts him everyday.
The only person that was there for him was Mutsui, his best friend.
Rai's parents died after an accident at their home in Osaka while he was on his way to school.
He was devastated when he heard the news.
This made his current depressed moods even worse. He's only able to study because of a part-time job he has at a nearby bar.
Mutsui is a horny womanizer who enjoys fights and frequent visits to the said bar. His attitude is apparently because of his parents who've always been fighting since he was just a child.This ruined him. But he still has a heart. The only person that ever mattered to him was the guy he considered hi brother, Rai. They decided to live together and take some of the pressure off their lives. Mutsui has always cared for his life-long friend and is always willing to sacrifice his life for him. Same goes with Rai.
One day, Rai and Mutsui are walking home from school. They're both seriously tired and are almost lumbering in the way they walk.
Mustui: Hey Rai. I almost forgot. I got the copies for the application forms for tomorrow. If you need one just ask.
Rai: Sure thing. Wanna stop by Taro-san's place and get a beer? You look like you need it more than usual. *Laughs*
Mutsui: Nah.. Sleep first.. Beer and hoes tomorrow...
Rai: Wow, you really ARE beat. Well, if that's what you want Mustui-kun.
When they got to their apartment, it was already 8:07pm. It was a long walk from school and they couldn't spend what little money they had on fairs. Mutsui opens the door and wearily wobbles his feet to the bed, and he lands face first.
Mutsui: Aaaaaaahhhhhh........
Rai gets in and looks at him.
Rai: Crazy b*****d. *Chuckles*
Mutsui: Don't blame me, blame those damn application forms. *Coughs* And that crazy old hag Mrs. Yadori
*Both Laugh*
Mutsui: Hey Rai... Thanks again...
Rai: For what?...
Mutsui: For everything.. I've made it so far and it's all because of you... I don't even care about bitches or alcohol or all that sh%t...
Rai: Oh.. Uhm...
Rai looks at Mutsui and blushes for some reason. He walks over and sits beside his friend's tired corpse and caresses his hair. Mutsui looks over and smiles, his face red with fatigue and relief all at the same time. Mutsui sits up and gets behind Rai.
Rai: Hey... What are you doing?...
Mutsui pulls up Rai's shirt and plays with his chest.
Rai: Ah... Ohw.. Mutsui-san... That's not what I wanted... S... Ah.. Stop you pervert!
Mutsui starts to kiss Rai's neck and Rai starts to get frightened as he feels Mutsui's hand start to go lower... and lower...
Rai: Ah!.. Oh.. What the hell is this?... I.. I can't... I can't fight it... I... Mutsui-san...
Right then and there, Rai slowly moves over to Mutsui and kisses his lips... They shut of the light and moaning starts coming out of the darkness...
That morning, Rai felt uneasy on his way to school... As he held secret Mustui's hand.
Mutsui was smiling for the first time (not including last night) in almost three years.
Rai: This feels.. Wrong... Mutsui...
Mutsui: I think it's meant to be... After all... We have been friends for too long...
Rai: But...
Mutsui: Shh...
Mutsui grabs Rai's arms, pushes him onto a tree and kisses his lips in broad daylight. Luckily nobody noticed.
Rai: Mutsui-san stop... Please.. I...
Mutsui: I LOVE YOU RAI....
Right then and there, Rai's heart almost misses a beat. He doesn't know if he should try to stop this intense feeling or to surrender to it.
Rai (in his head): Is this right? He's my friend... And I'm a guy.. But.. I can't... This is wrong...
But I can't fight it... This isn't the first time this thought was in my head... What do I do?...
A long pause as Mutsui still holds Rai in his arms....
Suddenly Rai bursts over to Mutsui and holds on to his shoulders as they kiss each other with passion! Rai has never had this feeling in a long time.. And for some reason.. It's couldn't be better.. But right afterwards, he takes a pen out of his pocket and stabs himself in the chest.
Mutsui: Rai! Rai no!
Blood starts to splatter all over the empty street and Mutsui panics as he sees the screaming Rai die in front of him.
Mutsui catches Rai in his arms.
Mutsui: Why....?....
Rai: I love you too.... MUTSUI...
Rai's eyes slowly start to close and finally his head falls and dangles as Mutsui screams his name and holds onto his lifeless body.
After that, Mutsui turns insane and unresponsive and kept Rai's body in a freezer that he would frequently visit. His love for him never goes away and he kept that freezer in a locked room somewhere in the apartment where only he had the key.
After a while their classmates start worrying s Mutsui and Rai haven't been in class for four months. They and some teachers search the apartment. They couldn't find anybody.
A student checks the locked room where the freezer is and as she takes a peek at the gap between the floor and the door, he spots a foot.
Student: Guys! There's somebody in here!
Teacher: But it's locked?
Student: They might be in trouble! Break it down!
The students break down the door and find a bloody Mutsui, cold and dead, his lips stuck to Rai's lips... with the same pen Rai used to kill himself in Mutsui's chest....
- Title: Yaoi Suicide
- Artist: Fyodore
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Description:
Last night all I did was think about how it would be like if I was an anime guy in a YAOI.
So I decided to write this sh#t. I'm making things up as I go along so cut some slack.
lol
I'm trying to make this as less extreme as possible.
These are MY characters. any resemblance to some anime? Let me know.
This story is extremely short and only focuses on the two main characters. Rai and Mutsui.
This isn't a comedy, but feel free to laugh at me for making something this... uh... fruity.
lol - Date: 05/21/2009
- Tags: yaoi suicide
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Fyodore - 01/02/2010
- Uhm... Thanks but... ARE YOU GUYS SERIOUS?! Looking back at this now, I just feel silly.... and a little... scared. smile ) Thanks again.
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- B0ySkylark - 12/13/2009
- holy lube! that scared me! i was playing pokemon and one of the people's names is mutsui O.O i just stopped play cuz i was reading the end of the story when i found this
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- _Unloved_Kimino-chan_ - 12/12/2009
- Hm... Very nicely writen. I enjoyed reading it. Good job.
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- Hikari-wasure - 12/06/2009
- how sad and good at the same time now in the one confused sould i cry or be happy ahhh so confusing damnit!
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- garbage ghoul - 11/27/2009
- *gigglesnort* Wow... That's... extreme. Pardon me for my sick sense of humor.
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- Fyodore - 06/06/2009
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exactly why i chose creative writing as my course when i get to college.
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- Dark_oracle12 - 06/06/2009
- OMG! That was so sad! You should start writing for a living!
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