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All of you have heard of goldilocks, even if you haven’t heard her story. There is another story, one without a family of Bears, or potage, or chairs, or beds, and no that’s just right. Now days the story of goldilocks is nothing more then a story. But what happens when someone with an overwhelming desire decided to make it real.
Little Goldilocks never had a chance. She lost to the man who killed her. Scared to dead by the bear he decided to become, to make the story real. It was his favorite fairy tale after all and he was never sane.
Goldilocks was a lovely girl. Many admired her for her beauty her long gold hair, bright blue eyes, and rosy cheeks. Her tan was even but yet was fair. Most would look at young Goldilocks and think she was some story book princess. But sometimes that can be mistaken
The golden haired girl was loud but shy. Not a fair combination. They never went well together. But the people loved Goldilocks all the same.
Goldilocks loved the color gold, that’s why she loved her hair. Its golden color looked almost of real gold, falling over the low but always held high shoulders. That’s how he found her, little Goldilocks. He took her away and made his story real.
He took her to the forest into a small house hidden in the trees, and the man became the bears that had scared little Goldilocks out of there house back to her home. But Goldilocks never made it out of the house. Its locked doors kept her in, and it boarded window blocked her sight. Little Goldilocks had lost as soon as that man saw her.
Goldilocks was found dead soon after, scared to death and killed by a heart attack. Dressed in layers of gold most were never hers. She was dressed in gold, a golden dress to match her golden like hair. The one bear had picked out for her, as a clam that she was really Goldilocks.
Goldilocks’ golden hair dulled with her death, no longer gleaming gold.
The people cried for her. Her friends, her family they had also lost there made up princess. They wept for her, that young soul, as they stood on her gave. Their little Goldilocks was gone.
The bear of a man was found as well, but he was fine besides his lost mind. For the bear he lost his story once again, this was 12th time he had lost his Goldilocks, but this was the first time the men in blue had found all of his Goldilocks’ and taken them away. They had taken away all of his dolls that sat at the bottom of the broken down house. The bear is now sits in its cage with no hope of getting out.
And all of the other Goldilocks were saved from the large bear, never to be scared out of there lives again.
- by LearaCuroe |
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- | Submitted on 07/15/2008 |
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- Title: Goldilocks
- Artist: LearaCuroe
- Description: A warped version of “Goldilocks and the three Bears.” Thanks for reading. I know that there are spelling errors, but no matter how many times I look through it I can’t seem to find them all. If you could let me know if you see any I would appreciate it.
- Date: 07/15/2008
- Tags: goldilocks murder death crazy fairytales
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Comments (5 Comments)
- luvlybrat24 - 03/26/2009
- awesome, i luv the style of your writing and how u compare the crazy man to a bear in a fairy tale, 5/5 ^_^ this version is WAY better. i feel bad for goldilocks though...
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- teddehguru - 07/15/2008
- I like this version better xD. 5/5
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- Domme Black - 07/15/2008
- I agree
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- Okami Ameras - 07/15/2008
- Poor Goldilocks...
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