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Dominique held his shock. surprise and pain as Anna bit him. Of course, Dominique wanted to become an author, yet his parents put him in the field of science after severe training in the military.
Words were freely flowing from the pain.
I thought that I could help her, my Anemone. She refused my offer to bite me, yet, here I am in slight agony... Yet, here she is now sucking at my blood, while I am praying that she won't stop this feeling. Even though it's as close as my dear Anemone has gotten to me, I wish her life with the General will work out.
I am a mere human, and she is a vampire, I was certain everything could work out... But she chose the General over myself, and even though my body is going numb, I will never forget the smell of my sweet flower. My Anemone. he thought, placing his hand on the bite mark after everything was finished.
When she had departed, my Anemone had fled back to the General, hoping he would accept her for biting me, her first love. It was as true as what the Corporal had said to me, I was a mere infantryman... Torn between fighting and thinking for myself. But, I couldn't fight anymore with Anemone at my side.. Her long brown hair, swirling past her stomach and back, those beautiful red ribbons she always wore to visit me. She was a work of art, and I was nothing...
Let's just hope the General treats my lovely Anemone to a fine life.
- by Rubedos Benevolent Charm |
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- | Submitted on 07/16/2008 |
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- Title: My Sweet....
- Artist: Rubedos Benevolent Charm
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This is from one of my posts, but I'm trying to put it into one of my future novels.
I hope to God by 2010, I'll have "Bloodlust: Shards of Fate" published for all vampire lovers. - Date: 07/16/2008
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Comments (2 Comments)
- XxLunar ReflectionxX - 11/23/2009
- i don't know... it just doesn't sound right, it's not real(the thought i mean). its also a little confusing
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- RukaxAkatski - 05/10/2009
- This is really cool ill be sure to get it
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