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I looked into the hunter's eyes, his eyes black with thirst. Knowing that this is my last minute on earth, I waited for him to strike. He would quench his thirst with my blood, after chasing me for weeks. I knew I would die, and I wanted to run, but he was faster of course. Sinking his teeth into my flesh, I felt the burning of the venom in my veins. After that I couldn't remember anything at all.
I was suprised to wake up in a dumpster, my skin was cold, hard and in a puddle, my reflecting image perfect, but my eyes red. The thirst was uncontrollable, and the stray cat that wandered was the victim of it. This was the beginning of forever.
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Comments (5 Comments)
- jesse1516 - 08/07/2008
- intresting, very intresting, 5/5
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- nootgeiszler - 08/07/2008
- p.s me again! Write more! I can't stop re-reading it!
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- nootgeiszler - 08/07/2008
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I love it very much but just ONE thing!
Vampires don't have reflections.... And you said she saw her reflection in a puddle. - Report As Spam
- PR1NC3SS T1G3R - 08/02/2008
- That's really good. I actually finished reading it ^^
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- Yunies 2nd Account - 08/01/2008
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Twilight is an amazing series
I really like your detail in your writing. Keep it up! - Report As Spam