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chapter 3
Alice's p.o.v
I looked at the man who i knew was my dad because i've seen pictures he showed me to my room i unpacked i went to the living room and sat he sat infront of me and begun his story "alice i'm a vampire your mother wasnt so your half,any way twenty years ago your mother was sixteen i was seventeen i went on a mission like normal when i finished i was about to leave when i saw her,for the next week we talked till my best friend caught us i was forbidden from seeing her,but i snuck out i told her what i was she didn't care so we ran away together five years went by she told me she was pregnant i knew the only way to protect you was for me to go back and for her to run she went to america, nine months later my sister told me a baby girl was born and her name was alice enyo sterling, you mum sent me a letter that said 'once she dies you would be sent to live with me' so fifteen years later here you are" i fainted after a while i woke up i looked around it wasn't a dream "do you know why mum chose enyo" he looked and relied "i don't even know what it means" i sighed "it is a greek name it means horror or waster of cities she was a greek goddess sometimes said to be ares mother or sister" i said i was tired abit weirded out, so i went to bed.
chapter 4
Alice's p.o.v
I heard talking from downstairs i got up i was wearing my night shirt with knee length red nd black stripy socks i got to the top of the stairs i saw the living room fireplace was light i walked down the stairs not makeing a sound i looked peering my head from behind the wall i saw two adults and some teenagers they were the emo's from earlier i heard "go back to bed alice" they all looked at me so i went up the stairs i felt like a five year old i went back to bed i was dreaming when i heard "im going to kill you" i looked and saw some dude comeing at me with a knife i woke up screaming then most of the vampires from down stairs burst into my room i said "sorry nightmare",the next morning i fell out of bed and that was my alarm i went to brush my hair and teeth i got to the mirror and said "hello reflection" i screamed jole came in and said "what" i fainted after a while i woke up once again surrounded by vampires, jole said "whats wrong you fainted" i got up and ran to the mirror i opened my mouth ahhhh i still had them jole said "oh you got fangs" once again i fainted i felt someone lift me of the cold stone floor, i heard "do you think she will do this all the time" the voice it was close another voice said "well she fainted when i told her she was a half-breed"
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- | Submitted on 08/15/2008 |
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- Title: black roses ~part 2~
- Artist: Angel-from-my-nightmare22
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please please dont post this on another website and claim it as your own!
becus im a person and i have feelings and this story is my best! - Date: 08/15/2008
- Tags: vampire black roses
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Comments (4 Comments)
- nerd specks - 08/01/2009
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Wall of text? Ew. D:
1. Capitalize your words.
2. Space out dialogue.
3. Use punctuation.
4. Use spaces between comas 'ex: Word, word'
5. Spell check.
Ehh.
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- Sawako kuronuma Destiny - 05/23/2009
- This is a good story but try to make it more simple on the lastpart. I can visualize almost everything except the last part, I got lost
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- Emma-Marie0001 - 12/16/2008
- oooo i hope u continue im really loving ur storie!!!
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- lynx4 - 12/15/2008
- plz continue i really like dis
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