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Introduction
My name is Mafuyu Hinasaki, i have come to small abandoned town to investigate the Himuro mansion where bizarre murders and rituals had took place, also i am here to investigate the disappearance of Junsei Takamine, an author investigating the Himuro mansions happenings.
My investigation on Junsei has led me here, where he was last seen heading with two researchers who work for him, there names are still unknown. Apparently Takamine was writing a book on the supernatural happenings that supposedly had gone on here, but i don't know whether to believe that or not. Well now i'm at the mansion theres no heading back, i placed my hand on the mansions main door handle and slowly opened the door, i entered into a dark room, everything seemed to be unstable, ceiling pillars had collapsed, floor boards had rotted and started to decay. I took one step into the room and the front doors suddenly slammed shut, now the room was completely pitch black, i couldn't see a thing, luckily i had brought a torch with me. I switched it on and scouted the room again, there was a figure stood in the room with faced towards the wall, i slowly stepped towards the figure, i reached my hand to touch its shoulder when i heard a loud screech come from the following room, i quickly turned around to see what the noise was, but i could see nothing and when i turned back around the figure gone, disappeared. I was confused, i couldn't tell if my eyes were playing tricks on me, or if it was my imagination or something else, well i thought it was just best to forget about it. I carried on into the next room. The next room was bigger than the last, sort of like a main hall, there was another door at the other side of the room and some stairs leading up, but i had still found no clue to Mr Takamines whereabouts. I decided to excavate the bottom floor first so i headed towards the first floor door at the other side of the room. I entered through the door into a hallway, with a t junction at the end of it and ropes hanging from the ceiling, theres was something about this hallway that made me feel uncomfortable, it sort off fetched a chill to my spine, but i couldn't chicken out now, i had to find the missing researchers. I carried on down the hallway, until i came to the end, there was a large mirror at the end of the hallway, i took a glance in the mirror to see a reflection of Mr Takamine walking through the door i just came through, i called out to him but he didn't reply, i started to chase after him, thinking my investigation had finally finished, but that was far from true, suddenly i felt numerous hands grab me from behind, i turned round to see where the hands were coming from and i froze in fear. And thats last thing i remember.
Chapter 1
My name is Miku Hinasaki and i am searching for my brother Mafuyu Hinasaki.
To be concluded
- by swifty07837 |
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- | Submitted on 09/07/2008 |
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- Title: Tormented souls - intro
- Artist: swifty07837
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Description:
a story of a brother and sister who come across a old mansion thats holds many secrets and souls trapped inside. this is only the intro but if you would like chapter 1 to be wrote plz post a comment telling me to do so.
chapter 1 is the follow up to this, and it has been done, just search my work to find the next part, thanks for reading
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- Date: 09/07/2008
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- Your the best man.This is why i added you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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- swifty07837 - 09/07/2008
- please read and vote kindly
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