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boys are boys
they are not girls, of course
a boy for me is poison for my soul,
a thorn in my mind...
and a bleeding wound in my heart...
i hated a boys for quite some time now,
i never believed that his attitude will change,
it wasn't possible for me to cure...
until i met the perfect guy...
he is kind, yet sometimes naughty,
he is silent yet sometimes violent...
he is childhood friend...
my best friend...
my inspiration...
JC waldo. biggrin
- by CarmzCookie |
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- | Submitted on 09/12/2008 |
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- Title: perfect guy
- Artist: CarmzCookie
- Description: its how i feel... when boys are around...
- Date: 09/12/2008
- Tags: inspiration imagination friendship
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Comments (6 Comments)
- monkeyluv4ever - 07/21/2009
- Wow, good luck. I hope u and ur boyfriend make each other very happy 4 ever. I felt something from our poem, it made me consider things, i guess that's what poems do. So it was a good poem I hope u and ur boyfriend are in love 4ever.
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- cutepie_cutepie16 - 09/12/2008
- i mostly like poems that rhyme, but i like this 1 too. 4/5
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- cutepie_cutepie16 - 09/12/2008
- i mostly like poems that rhyme, but i like this 1 too. 4/5
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- pluralfoxes - 09/12/2008
- I like it 8/10
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- Clevergirl14 - 09/12/2008
- i love it but i still think you could have edit it more overall 8/10
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- CarmzCookie - 09/12/2008
- comments are important...
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