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Sienna is around 21 years of age and is very attractive. Sienna has long dark blonde hair, a light brown eye and a light purple eye. Her skin is very light tan. When she arrives home from college she walks into her room and looks into her mirror then screams for a split second at the sight behind her.
“Sienna what’s wrong?” asks Goku walking into her room.
“There is something in my room.” says Sienna looking around the room.
“I don’t see anything.” says Goku looking confused. Then Chichi yells for Goku. “I’ll be back.” says Goku walking out of Sienna’s room.
Piccolo looms over Sienna and suddenly grabs her from behind. Sienna screams but her scream is cutoff as Piccolo puts his hand over her mouth. Piccolo drags Sienna toward the window then shoots into the air with her.
When Piccolo lands at his turret he drags her to a room he has prepared for her. Then he shoves her into the room and says “If you need anything my servants will attend you.” then slams the door.
Sienna looks around then sits on the bed and begins crying. At five o’clock one of Piccolo’s servants knock on the door and opens it to see Sienna crying. “Sienna supper is ready.” says the servant trying to ignore her quiet crying.
At the dinner table Piccolo is sitting waiting for Sienna to come to dinner. Finally she comes down the hall and sits at the table. “You may partake whenever.” says Piccolo then sips his water.
“Why did you kidnap me?” asks Sienna just sitting there not eating.
“Because if Goku wants to stay alive he’ll give you to me for my own reasons.” says Piccolo calmly.
“What if he won’t?” asks Sienna nervously.
“Then I’ll kill him and keep you. I want offspring and that is what you are here for. You will be my offspring since I there are no females I can reproduce with. I’ll take good care of you I promise.” says Piccolo eyeing her.
“What if I don’t want to be your offspring?” asks Sienna looking at her feet.
“You have no choice Sienna. If you try to run away I will find you and bring you back here. I will never hit you, but I will punish you.” says Piccolo then sips his water.
“Mmm.” says Sienna just staring at the table.
“Why aren’t you eating?” asks Piccolo curiously.
“I’m not hungry. I only eat when I’m hungry and right now I’m not.” says Sienna counting the marks on the table.
“Hmm…. Well then you may go back to your room then if you want.” says Piccolo getting up from the table.
“Ok.” says Sienna getting up and walking back down the hall to the room. Once in her room Sienna lays down on her bed and soon is sleeping. Piccolo walks into her room around midnight and sees Sienna sleeping. Piccolo sits on her bed and picks her up then rocks her back and forth while rocking her he hums a tune. Then he pulls back the covers and sets her on the bed then pulls the covers over her. Then Piccolo walks out of the room.
- by Shadowless Knight |
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- | Submitted on 10/16/2008 |
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- Title: DBZ Piccolo gets a daughter
- Artist: Shadowless Knight
- Description: . A story about Piccolo and how he takes Goku's daughter for his own.
- Date: 10/16/2008
- Tags: piccolo gets daughter
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Shadowless Knight - 10/16/2008
- Ok I'll Try to do better!
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- Sembri - 10/16/2008
- The basis for the story is a good start. But it seems like you rushed the story along. My suggestion is to take your time. Write down every detail as it comes to you, don't shorten it for time.
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- MightyWonderWoman - 10/16/2008
- The most noticable thing is that Piccolo is OOC, I don't see him kidnapping Goku's 'daughter', nor any of that in general. I'm sorry to say, but Sienna is a Mary-sue, having past the 'boarder line' Sue with her introduction. Aside from the character faults, the story is confusing, has no real structure and is stiff. My suggestion for you is to start over. It's okay to have an OC and Piccolo, but make her a realistic character, not one that could win 'Miss Universe Award'
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