She's a What?!

• Artist: Internet Whore 101
• Description: a girl who finds out that she is a vampire.
• Date: 10/30/2008
• Tags: shesawhat

It was dark out, and Miyako was walking along the path to the Moon Dorm. Kaname Kuran, a sophmore and the most handsomest guy in school had asked her to come that night. She didn't know why, but she couldn't care less. She was excited that he had asked her. Normally, that didn't happen very often. She was finally there, and she went up to the door and was about to knock when the door opened. Kaname was standing there, smiling.
Miyako:"Um....."
Kaname:"It's ok. I knew it was going to be you anyway. Come in."
She walked in, and he closed the door behind her.
Kaname:"Have a seat."
She did, and he sat across from her, legs folded.
Miyako:"Nice place you have here."
Kaname:"Thank you. would like something to eat, or drink?"
Miyako:"No thank you. Anyway, you're the one who told me to come over here. What is it that you want?"
Kaname's face got serious, and Miyako had a strange feeling that this news wasn't going to be good.
Kaname:"I called you over here for one reason, and one reason only. you've been experiencing some weird symptoms, am I correct?"
Miyako nodded, waiting for the bad news.
Kaname:"Then it's official. Miyako souma......you are a vampire."
It hit her like a ton of bricks.
Miyako:"I'm a.....a what?"
Kaname:"A vampire. Are you ok? You look pale."
Miyako started swaying back and forth.
Kaname:"Miyako? Miyako?"
She fainted.

Comments

[Thorn Of The Sky]

I'm not really sure about it..It was good i it's own way and it may be someone else's favorite thing but its not what i would read.

[Slightly Epic]

Wow, this really SUCKS! Lmao, you know I'm joking! 4laugh
Nice Job! smile

[Internet Whore 101]

tuxtux, i am still new at this, so give me time........Yuuki, miyako is my own character, and still new at this.......The unknwown, thank u for that nice comment, and yes, she does have a crush on him.

[Your Silver Seal]

It's awesome u should continue on, oh and does Miyako have a crush on Kaname

[xXco0kiEzXx]

I think u sould make up ur own characters and not use characters from Vampire Knight and also ad in more details and make it longer or do chapters

[tuxtux]

You should name the "weird symptoms" she's been experiencing. Also, if she goes to school, doesn't she have to walk around in the daylight? Can vampires do that?
Bit illogical, and way too short, it's not at all described what makes her experience different, you wouldn't think she's feeling in any way weird about herself until the end.