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Chapter 1 " The Truth"
Once apon a time in a far away kingdom,A beautiful princess was walking in her
beautiful garden.All the flowers were blue, red, orange, and yellow.It looked like a sun
ontop of a clear blue ocean.The princess name was Roseland.She has a brother who is
three years older than her.Her brothers name is Edward.Edward was walking with Roseland.
Roseland was talking about the ocean and how much she loved to see it.Edward than said
"Then why dont you go little sister"."Well you know mother wouldnt let me,she would freak
out if I went"said Roseland."well you are right sister, but what about if I went with you and
have are most trusting guards with us"said Edward."hmm"said Roseland."Maybe, lets ask mother
tommarow morning at breackfast"said Roseland.The next morning at breackfast"mother"said
Roseland."yes"mother said.
"tommarow may Edward and I go to the ocean,of course we will have are most trust worthy
guards with us".Mother than said "why do you want to go to the ocean".There was a long pause.
Finnaly Edward said"well we are old anough to go to the ocean mother and roseland wants to wacht
the sunset and smell the ocean air"."well fine you may go but on on condition,you must keep safe"
said mother.
"yes mother"said Edward and Roseland.The next day,Roseland and Edward packed for a day
at the ocean.When they were done there two guards came in and said they were done packing.
When they got to the ocean,Roseland was amazed of what she saw.Befor Edward and the two guards
got off there horses,Roseland had her feet in the water.When Edward got off his horse he said
"wow this is amazing".
When he got the the spot where Roseland put her shoes and clothes.He set down his bag and
Roselands bag,He took of his shirt off and his shoes and he dove into the water.He splashed Roseland
and then dove in after Edward.When she dove in she could breathe underwater.Roseland was so amazed
that she jumped out of the water and fell back into the water.The guards saw her and there mouths
fell open,then one of them said "wow your amazing princess!".The other guard didnt saw a thing.
While Roseland was swimming she saw alot of colorful fish and then Roseland said"hello".
Then a fish that was a beautiful shade of blue said"hello my princess"."You know me little fish"?
"Call me Rena,and yes i do,you are the princess of the water Roseland"."princess of the water?why do
you call me that"asked Roseland."well you are a princess right"."yes i am"."and you can breathe under
water and talk,right"."well yes but i dont know how"said Roseland.
"you are the princess of the water,your mother isnt your real mother she found you on the
beach while she was walking with her sons James and Edward.You were 2 and Edward was 5.Her oldest
son died in a war againts the British.So her only son left was Edward.Your real mother is the queen of
the water her name is Raine".
"wait is my real mother a mermaid"said Roseland."no your mother is human
and your father is a merman"."but then how is my mother able to stay underwater"?"she drank the tea of enternal breathe"."enternal breathe,wiat then how am i able to breathe underwater"asked Roseland.
"Your father is a merman so you have the ability to breathe underwater".
"Wow"said Roseland in a shocked voice."im half mermaid and half human"."thank you for telling me that Rena"."oh wait before I go your mother is at the bottom of the sea in the pacific ocean"."oh thanks
I will go find her,bye"!
After the fish left Roseland had to tell Edward about it.When she got out of the water Edward
ran toward her and said "where were you!".He said it in a loud and mad voice.Roseland then said"I was swimming and I met a fish whos name was Renna, And im the princess of the water, And my father is a merman,And i can breathe underwater"! Then Edward looked sad and said" so you figured out that your the princess of the water .""Yes i did and im going to go find my mom and my dad,and we will be happy and live together ,forever isnt that great.".Then Edward said"your gonna leave mother and i all alone'.HIs eyes were wet and tears rolled down his cheeks.
Then Roseland Put her arms around him and said"im sorry,I just... Wasent thinking ,im sorry.""dont be just do wat u want but im coming with you"."ok we will leave in 5 days".When they got back to the castle mother was waiting for them in the throne room.She asked us if we had fun and we both said "yes"at the same time.Then mother said"Roseland i need to tell you something ,something about your real mother..""" I already know mother i mean queen of Tar'zarch"."no please call me April."yes april"
On the 5th day Roseland and Edward gathered there stuff and put it on there horse.The horses name was May.May is one of the fastest and most beautiful horse that they have.When they mounted there horse,Mother came out.:Edward please take care of Roseland "said mother."yes i will mother."
Then they rode off.Mother was happy that Roseland was going to find her real mother.When they got to the ocean they needed to find a boat to get across.Edward Said'I will go find a boat,you wait here.".Roseland shook her head.When Edward came back he had a big wooden boat with carvings of a mermaid on it."wow" Rose said.When he got to Roseland,he gave her a ruby watch.When he gave it to her she saw that his arm was bleeding.She took his arm and took her big red ribbon and tied it on his bleeding arm to stop it from bleeding.Edward said"thank you...Rose.""Its getting really dark we should sleep here for the night."said Edward.Rose shook her head.That night Rose could'nt sleep.Rose walked toward the ocean and sat down an the sand.She looked at the moon and began singing a lullaby.Edward woke up and heard the voice he stood up and went toward the ocean.He saw Rose near the water.Then he knew who was singing,it was Rose.When Edward went to sit next to Rose,She stopped singing.
"please continue"Edward said.Rose shook her head and started singing again.When she finished the song Edward said"waht a beautiful voice you have.""thank you"Rose Replied.Edward kissed Roses forehead and said "goodnight".
- Title: The princess of the water
- Artist: Roselynd
- Description: This is wat i have so far i have a lot more to do.I HOPE U LIKE IT!I This is the first chapter and when i finish the book im gonna try to publish it.
- Date: 11/25/2008
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- ElectraShocked - 07/22/2009
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ahh...bad grammar and missspelled words....Minor migraine on it's way...lmao! Maybe you could fit a little more detail into it....? It would be a lot better if you did, good luck with the book!
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- Roselynd - 03/28/2009
- i can not post the 3rd chapter because someone stole my story so im trying to get it back
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- Roselynd - 03/25/2009
- thx i was just typing it fast
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- Savior_ofunsafespirits - 03/25/2009
- Hey, it's really good, but you have horrible grammar. put it into Microsoft Word or Wordperfect, and they will tell you what the mistakes are.
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- xo_MiSSYLiSSY - 03/07/2009
- hey, i like ur story could you update me if you had the other chapters of yours? i like it very much.. thnx for posting it =)
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