- There was Jay. Staring a the blood pouring down her hands. She didn't think it was real......but it was. She stared at the maniac standing infront of her. He cut off her hands! She thought she was going to die until she felt a twinkle of relief. But as soon as she turned around to run for her life, she saw the man pull a steak out of his coat and stab her right in the chest. She felt as if her life was going down in a black hole. Down and down and down and she never reached anything. Jay studered to the ground until she was gasping for her last breath. She felt her heart rate start slowing down. Pump-Pump Pump-Pump...........Pump......Pump..........................Until she fell fast asleep is the middle of Crostake Woods. We have never seen her since or the maniac. But it has been said to have seen the ghost of Jay, walking through the woods asking for help. She won't do any harm, if you don't scare her. Beacue if you do, it will be your last scare, until your afterlife.
- by Killa Kammm78 |
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- | Submitted on 12/03/2008 |
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- Title: Crostake Woods
- Artist: Killa Kammm78
- Description: This was a story i thought up. I like it, even though it's a little short. I think it has good content for a short story though! Please comment!!
- Date: 12/03/2008
- Tags: crostake woods
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Comments (3 Comments)
- NoNo Nope - 02/13/2009
- i like the man he sounds nice 5
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- Kitty Pandas - 12/07/2008
- I like your clear spelling style! =D
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- Puddlezinn Mudd - 12/03/2008
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Freaky.
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