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I fight my ways
I found it all
I made it
But I found out
That all I got
was a bunch of lies
I fell to the end
I felt trapped
My thoughts and fears returned
Tears fell
But do I care?
Rage increased
The memories came back
The day...
That faithful, faithful... day
Horrible
Frightening
I was astonished
But no one cares
Cause to face the truth...
I'm dead down
Below everyone
and no one can see me
No one can hear me
Are they deaf?
The world is changing
I am changing
Everything is changing
I completed everything... and yet, it's not enough
I did the best
I gave my shot
My effort
I failed?
I accomplished?
I don't know...
Everything seems to run by so fast.
Now it sucks.
- Title: Bloody Fist
- Artist: Black Ski
- Description: I Don't know what I was thinking... seriously... I'm just a small tiny... something. Well anyways, if this poem sucked. I don't really give a care or a chance. Just rate it and say whatever. This is my first too. So, don't go to harsh on me. :) Enjoyz
- Date: 12/05/2008
- Tags: punchmetillidie
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Comments (3 Comments)
- XPeanutButter_DangorousX - 03/22/2009
- awsome!!!♥♥♥♥♥♥♥!!!loved it!!!it was amaxing!!!!and i do mean amaxing!!!♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
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- araya_saynomi - 12/17/2008
- wow.. 5/5 amazing job!
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- xX_Angel_Girl_Xx1 - 12/05/2008
- awsome smile
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