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Everything was so confusing the first day and a mess. It was one of the worst days of my life! First i spilled orange juice on my brand new pink Terrycloth tube dress, and it left a big stain. I had nothing else to wear cause i was already late! Yep, i have bad karma and i already knew that the first day was going to be the most horrible first day of first days!
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I was already 15 minutes late and i didn't need anymore distractions.
"Miss! Where is your hall pass?!" the hall monitor (a dork who speaks like he is 30 years old).
"Ummmmmmmmmmmm.............," i quickly went through my oversized Aero navy blue tote. Oh no, um where is my hall pass! uhhhhhhhh hurry up Jess!!!! The monitor is waiting impatiently!!!!!!! My hands were like a spinning mad tornado. By the time i found my hall pass, first period was already over and the monitor alreay left!
"Oh great." I grumbled.
- by Angel_Of_Witness_Patrol88 |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/06/2008 |
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- Title: It's Over (Part 2 The Mess)
- Artist: Angel_Of_Witness_Patrol88
- Description: 'I already knew that the first day was going to be the most horrible first day of first days!' T_T Please Comment and sorry if it's short, i needed more time to write somehow.
- Date: 12/06/2008
- Tags: firstdays
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Comments (4 Comments)
- T-T_hEaRtBrEaK_T-T - 12/08/2008
- yea its too short but its rly good!!! and i ddnt noe u spend 100 gold on this!!! if u do then u shood rly make it longer....cuz now ur like waistin ur money...=S
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- Angel_Of_Witness_Patrol88 - 12/07/2008
- kk goodness! i was doing this quickly
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- MiKiiHenderson - 12/06/2008
- It is too short. Make it longer. I mean, you are spending 100 gold on such short stories. And spell check please. You spelled impatiently wrong. Good besides that.
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- xxFiRe-x-IcExx - 12/06/2008
- good story! u should definitely add more. & take ur time writin 2 make the parts longer...
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