• RATE&COMMENT PLEASE~ My first storyy xS

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    His in-human senses were petrifying. His silk peach warm blooded skin , his black smooth hair, and his so in-human self seemed to memorized me. His body against the moon lights beam made it even more magical. Me, staring at a alien, the fear of all humans, the terror of earth, seemed... nothing to me at the moment. The quite water fall that was falling smoothly plus the white light that it was reflecting, couldn't be more perfect. I took baby steps, slowly approaching him, he was pleasantly resting in the water, his back to a rock, as if nothing around him could touch him. I tip-toed so that I wouldn't be heard, and I decided to walk behind from his head. My heart pumped viciously as every millisecond that past. I was sweating, and my toes continued to move towards him. It bothered me kinda of that he was half naked, but I tried to ignore that fact since technicaly I wasn't going to to anything that was going to embarres me or him, so I tried to brush that thought off. As I got close enough, I began to lower myself near the rock he was leaning against, and I laid myself, stomach on the floor, so that I could get a better look of his face.

    I scold myself in my head 'Why am I doing this!!!!, its not like I've never seen his face before!' at the second, the crazed devil of him staring back of me came back. I flinched, but I tried as hard as I could to forget it. I continued to stare. His features were absolutely amazing. I felt like I was referring to Edward Cullen, the mythical vampire in the book Twilight. But I shook my head, Edward isn't Chinese so I ditched that thought. As I had enough staring at him, I looked away and decided to stare at the moon.
    'Its a full moon tonight eh?'
    I whispered.
    ' Yea, it is.
    I jumped back to my feet totally stunned.
    'HUHH WHAT THE.. h-how-w'd y-you'
    I was stutering like a fourth grader who didn't know how to read my speech.
    'Ohmygwad... you were awake the whole time!'
    'Nope, I was asleep until I heard your footsteps approaching me.'
    Darrick gave a small snicker, but I kicked him in the face
    'Oh c'mon I really wanted to see what were you trying to do.'
    I sighed. I guess there's nothing to be mad for.
    'Fineee I guess your rightt.'
    I sat back down again on my butt, and Darrick go out of the water to sit beside me.
    'So why aren't you alsleep? I don't think you should be up at 12am in the morning'
    'Well you shouldn't either'
    I gave him a small nudge on his arm.
    'Well, since I'm 'not' human, sleep for me doesn't matter. I can sleep whenever I want to.'
    Darrick gave a 5 year old winning smile on his face. I couldn't help but giggle.
    'Ehh whats so funny?'
    Darrick stood up a bit his voice directing to me.
    'You silly.'
    I poked him in his cheek and smiled.
    But suddenly, something just notice between us.

    Our faces were incredibly close to each other.

    I quickly looked away, and I felt like I was in some sort of cliche drama show.
    I let the red blush on my face smoothen out, and I faced him again.
    His face was also scarlet. but he was staring at the water instead.
    'Well umm...'
    I wanted to start a converstaion so that the weird moment would end.
    'Umm yea'
    He answered back.
    'well hey...'
    I talked helpeless as I tried to think of something to think of.
    'Hey don't you think that the day is---'
    I was cut off my a soft finger by my lip.
    'Please, don't try I get it.'
    Darrick looked helpless too, he moved closer to me, and my blood pulse roase another level.
    'Theres umm something I have to tell you...'
    Darrick avoided looking at me dierctly so his face was facing the water fall. I could feel the akward tension that was surrounding us. I decided to end it.
    'You like me right?'
    I qucikly kicked my self for saying that. I sounded so bold, but I knew I compleatly runined the moment.
    Darrick looked at me and gave me a sly smile.
    'Well if you put it that way, than sure. But hey, what about you, how do you feel about me?'
    The dreaded question that I hoped he would never asked was said.
    I started playing with my fingers, and I wasn't sure how to say it. I looked back at him, and I swear all eyes were on me. His handsome feature,and his serious desperate face, made it hard to think.

    I decided to hold his hand

    I squeezed it between my two hand, and I left the left hand to hold his.

    'Well... I'm admit that... I'm defiantly charmed by you... and that, for some odd reason...'
    The words that were coming out of my mouth were harder to speak.
    'It was... danger and love at first sight...'
    I started to remenber my first appearance with him. The car accidnt. My parents. The blood. The killer that was him, the guy I seemed to fall in love with.
    'Its actually kinda weird to say it...'
    I smiled a bit, but tears were already flowing out of my eyes.
    Before one had a chance too fall off my cheek, Darrick was already there wiping them.
    'I'm sorry. I'm so sorry. How could I have done this to you.. ahh.. it was definitely foolish of me to have done this to you. God. I am such a freak...'
    Darrick was suddenly punishing himself now.
    'No. It isn't. Whatever happened before was suppose to happen. It isn't your fault. Its just...'
    I stood up with my knees, so that I could wipe his tears. 'Life was written like this. What happend, happend for a reason. Its too late to regret it now. Our actions are already written in pen... we just can't permanently erase it...'
    I decided to give him a hug to cheer him up. But as I was about to do so, he took hold of my two shoulders, and he forced me into his body, his arms holding me tightly around my back. My arms were bent and uncomfortable, so I extended them to hold his back.

    'Crystal... How could you.. how could you stand a monster like me?'

    'Well, we're all monsters, but what happens to us can't change our lives. We all have to fight back our obstetrical, and grow stronger to face it.'
    I tried to struggle out of his grip to get a better look of his face. His crippled angel face was hurtful to see, but I was able to face it.

    'Everything alright trust me with this. I mgiht lead you into a solid rock, but at least, we can face that dead end to figure it out together?'
    I took my arms and I tried to hug him as hard as I can.
    I moved my face to stare back at his, and at that same moment, a feeling kicked in.
    His face and mines were again few inches away from each other, but this timehe moved.
    His face was suddenly against my forehead.
    He kissed me on the forehead.
    His right arm was around my head, and his left was holding me.
    I felt a blush attack, but I knew exactly what to do.
    After his face left my head, I did something that the old 15 year old me would never do.
    I kissed him back on the cheek.
    I took my arms to hold his cheeks, and I gently as possible pressed my lips against his skin.
    He looked back at me with a surprised look, but then he smiled back at me.
    'Wanna go stare at stars with me? Well if your not tired or anything.'
    He smiled and I nodded.
    I stood up, and he stood up with me at the same time, I stretched a bit to get my muscles alive again, but before I could move, I was suddenly off the floor, and I was in his arms.
    'Huhh What the... PUT ME DOWN'
    I started struggle out of his arms but he had me tight.
    'C'mon don't move. I wan to take you somewhere to watch them.
    I sighed.
    'Fine'
    He smiled with satisfaction, and he jumped 12 feet off the ground while jumping on tree branches. My eyes were closed becasue of the fast wind that was pressing against my face, but when it stooped, and I opened my eyes to see where we were.
    I was speechless. eek
    We were at the edge of the foresty island, where a beach was placed around it.
    Darrick carefully set me back down to the floor, and the soft sand was eating my shoes in.
    I decided to take them off to feel the softness of the sand. I took them off, and threw them in some bush. Ahh I though. The bare feeling of sand felt good. As I looked up, Darrick was holding his hand up to me, smiling. I hesitantly took it, and I felt good not regretting it. He pulled me closer to the edge of the island until the soft splash of the ocean could touch my toes.
    'Here should be good.'
    He let go of my hand, and he laid flat back against the sand starting at the stars. I followed his movements and I laid down a hand length away from him.
    He was right.
    The view here is excellent.
    The twinkling stars above me were absolutely beautiful heart
    'I love it...' I replied
    I turned back to face him, but he was already staring at me.
    'Glad that you do.'
    I smiled back at him, I moved my arm slowly across the sand to grab hold of his.
    I took it and held it tight.
    'Darrick you've done it. You've taken my heart away. This view, its, marvelous...'
    I stared back at him meaningfully. He then slowly moved his body closer to me, so that now not only are bodies are close together, but also our heads.
    'No Crystal, you've taken my heart too. I'm now leaving it with you to take care of now. Like how I'm going to take care yours. He moved our link hands together so that they were in front of our face.

    'Together.'


    We whispered. heart