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Rebeca twitched her arm and legs trying to get back up.It was no use,the creature already was inspecting the other helpless people.What is in his spit? She wondered.She cried out but it was faint and low.She wasn't sure of what to do next.What could she do next.She kept twitching making no effort in getting back up.Everyone was sleeping and clueless of the creature that laid before them.Rebeca took a while to inspect it.It was definetly male,hair that looked excatly like the food.Its face was rotted and she began counting it's arms,5.It slightly touched everyone and spit on them,causing them to wake up but suffer the same fate as Rebeca.Paralyzed and soon to be eaten or bitten,she wasn't excatly sure.She stared at it in horrid amazment.For some strange reason it ran out of the Shelter.Through the door?And it shut and locked the door behind it?Rebeca was confused.Why would an absoulute horrible creature spit on people then leave graciously?Rebeca got up with no effort at all put in and so did everybody else.They didn't seem frightened or amazed or anything,just nutrual.She ran up to her dad and looked at him confused."Dad?Did you see that creature?The one that spit on you.I saw you,you were awake".She cried hoping he would remember.
"Honey,I think you were just dreaming,stop it and get a little more rest".
- by Deadly Dare Doll |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/19/2008 |
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- Title: The infected part 3.
- Artist: Deadly Dare Doll
- Description: Another one of my peices,don't be a grammer freak,I will try to review this and correct as much as I can.
- Date: 12/19/2008
- Tags: infected part
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Deadly Dare Doll - 01/02/2009
- I am about to add part 4,i haven't been on in a while but I will tryand put more.
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- StrawberryMangoIceCream - 12/28/2008
- WHERES PART 4?????? c'mon....
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- Remnantcutie - 12/28/2008
- hallucinations maybeh? or theyre all infected exept for her, i dunno its killin me! cliffhanger!
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- pure seyelance - 12/27/2008
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alright I don't get some of it but I'll give it 5*
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- musicbyme - 12/19/2008
- wow u hardly got any misttake and it was really good...i want to hear about infected 4 lol.
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